One Note from God chp.1

One Note from God

Have u ever felt at peace with the world?
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Have you ever been plagued with guilt?... or ashamed at what you've done before?
If you know these feelings and are bafulled by them.... then you already know how it feels. So sorry, but, it seems that i have not yet given you my name. My name is Jason I am an ArkAngel. You seem to know it though "That he who has fallen is nomore".

I am never more graced by a Hevenly fronteir.

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"Sabashtian stop playing around!" Athea yelled from the kitchen. "Go tell your father diner's nerly done." If you haven't got what's going on by now, then I will tell you. You see that little ashy-blond haired boy bouncing around outside? Well, that is Sabashtian the child that I whatch over. But, when the time comes I will not be able to watch him anymore, our chain will brake and I will get a new kid to look after. but, I don't think that I will like the day when he departs his life, ah, how I love this child. So cheery and full of joy.

Well gotta do my job.
"Yes, mum i'll go get dad for you."
"Thank you sweety," she said as she bent down to kiss him on the cheek.
I watched as he bounded away from the kitchen and into the living-room he went. This child was a farly cute child, that is half the reason of why I am so fond of him. His cheeks are always afalme, and his wild ashy-blond hair falls all over in rough tangly messes across his head, framing the baby-doll face of his that was now beeming when he saw his father, and oh, how he had his mother's eyes big pale blue with long luxurios eyelashes that made him look more like a girl. But, they were still the eyes that every girl would dream of having. I would watch over him no matter what.

But, then I did not think of such a day to accure. A day when he was kidnapped from me, snatched away from my gaurdian ship.

This is the day that I have feared of for so long. "Have you ever been plagued with guilt?... or ashamed of what you've done before?"

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Please tell me how I did with the first chapter.... please.